Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Formal Essay 1 Final Draft


Mingdong Chen

Freshman composition

Ms. Nargiza Matyakubova

September 27 2013

Literacy narrative

 

                                    Learning English as an immigrant

 

I would like to briefly introduce myself to you in the beginning; my name is Mingdong Chen who is an immigrant from China in 2010. I am 21 years old this year. I have been in United States for 3 years or so with my mother and old sister. My family lives in an small apartment in Brooklyn, I learn to be independent in United States with the helps of my parents and high school’s teachers, being capable of bravely facing any challenges come any time, dealing with difficulty, keeping unmovable during the hard times since everyone has his own business. Language is a bridge of communication with people, so I am gradually learning to speak English. However, I do not practice speaking often it, I used to learn the language by myself instead of discussing with others, I do not know what reasons cause me to be like that, but there are two things I want to share with you, my pleasure reading and my personal experiences of writings.

                     I have my “tiny library” in my bedroom created by my father. It is a desk which leans on the wall. With the increasing of the number of my books, my father decided to make a bookshelf for me. He installed an flat wood 12-inches above the desk into the wall with his own methods, then he continuous installed the second one same high as the first time above the desk, he carefully constructed it and made it strong enough to support the heavy books. With the emergence of the “tiny-library”, I can put the book I would like to read on the bookshelf, which can force me to open it and read it when I see it, because I found an habit I have. If I always put away the books and put them inside the box, I would not see them in daily, so I would not read them consciously. With the appearance of “tiny library”, it looks as if an alarm clock that remind me of reading book on time when I see them, it also offers comfortable environment for my daily reading as well as reinforcing my personal habits of reading books on the desk instead of laying in the bed, or just sitting on the floor. And I am getting fond of sitting the wooden chair closes to the desk reading what I want as time passes, “tiny-library” looks like as a teacher leads me to the road of literacy

In my own homeland, in fact, I personally seldom read the extracurricular books during from the periods of the elementary school to middle school to high school, but I usually did the sports and played the basketball with my classmates after school, and then finished the homework at home, so I seldom did the reading unless the teachers required me to do that. I am here to confess that my personal experiences of reading is little, but which does not mean that I am not able to the reading work, I just seldom read the books from out of class, however I usually carefully read my textbook, I will underline the sentences or some special vocabularies while I am reading, and figure out the meaning of words or sentences which may be related to the main idea of the article. Sometimes I will copy down the format of sentences expressed in the article; I may learn to use its format in my personal writing in the next time. After finishing reading, I may write down the main ideas of the article in short sentences and its lessons leaves on the margin side. Studying English in the United States, my personal reading experiences has changed with the movement of place. In the English class of ESLFirst, I will intend to find out the meaning of vocabularies I don’t know by looking up them in the dictionary in my cellphone. Second, I will try my best to understand the meaning of the whole sentence by combining the meaning of vocabularies I found before. However, sometimes there are lots of different interpretations for one word, so that I do not know which definition of word I need to choose to make the meaning of the whole sentence sound correct.

                     The first high school in United States I attended was Manhattan Comprehensive Day and Night High School which is located in between 14th street and 15th street, second Ave in Manhattan, maybe very few people heard about it. I spent almost three years to study ESL English program from level 1 to level 5 with my teachers’ help in that high school. I could have had a chance to jump directly from level 2 to level 4, but I insisted that I should follow step by step if I really longed to learn English very well. In the daily English class, we usually did the writing work, some reading work, a little speaking work and very little listening work. So I intended to be better at writing and reading parts, and the lack of speaking and listening. Even though I could do better in writing, however I had some habits of writing which I didn’t know if they were positive or negative to me, I used to spend some hours on how to arrange the paragraphs of each essay, what should I write down in each paragraph to make it look perfect, and what kind of words or vocabularies should I use in each sentence to make it sound vivid, I thought I had a lot of work to do to prepare the beginning of each essay before I started to write down it, did everyone have same experiences as me? So I profess that I cannot be able to writing a perfect essay in limited time. Also I would like to arrange or make sentences in my mind before I speak out to someone because my spoken English is not good enough I think, and sometimes I would forget the spelling of words I didn’t use them often. In the beginning of learning ESL English, I thought I learned a lot of useful English skills or experiences from my teachers’ lectures and the some grammar books which I studied by myself when I had free time, but I gradually got a strange phenomenon in the later days of learning English, which was that I felt like I learned less and less English skills in daily English courses later, and I do not like to talk with people in English. in other words, I might considered that there was nothing could make me interested in learning English again.

                     All in all, I hope teachers can provide me with lots of important and valuable suggestion on listening, speaking, readings and writings in the future days of college, and helps me regain the interests and enthusiasm of learning English .What’s more, the above some bad habits I have shown can be corrected, and I long to learn lots of or different kinds of vocabularies and improve my memory toward the spelling. So I am looking forward to the help from you.

                     In conclusion, we all know admittedly that offering rewards can be an incentive that attract students to study hard and get good performance, but we must bear in mind the main purpose of studying knowledge is itself-----------education, that is it. It is enough that we own a pure heart to study, do not disoriented by the extraneous things. Be yourself!

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