Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Formal Essay 1 First Draft


Freshman composition                               August 30 2013

Ms.Nargiza Matyakubova                            Mingdong Chen

 

 

                     In the beginning, I would like to briefly introduce myself to you; my name is Mingdong Chen who is an immigrant from China in 2010. I am 21 years old this year. I have come to United States for 3 years or so with my mother and old sister, my families live in an apartment in Brooklyn, I learn to be independent in United States with the help of my parents and high school’s teachers, and I gradually learn to speak English but not often to practice it, I used to learn by myself instead of discussing with others, I don’t know what reasons cause me to be like that, but there are two things I want to share with you, my pleasure reading and my personal  experiences of writings.

                     I have my “tiny library” in my bedroom created by my father; it is a desk which leans on the wall. With the increasing of the number of my books, my father decided to make a bookshelf for me, he installed an flat wood 12 inches above the desk into the wall with his methods, then he continuous installed the second one same high as the first time above the desk, he carefully constructed it and made it strong enough to support the heavy books. With the emergence of the “tiny-library”, I can put the book I would like to read on the desk, which can force me to open it and read it when I see it, because I found an habit I have, if I put away the books and put them inside the box, so that I would not see them in daily, so I would not read them. Anyway, the appearance of “tiny library”, it looks as if a clock that remind me of reading book on time when I see them.

In my own homeland, began from the elementary school to middle school to high school, actually I personally seldom read the extracurricular books, but I usually did the sports and played the basketball with my classmates after school, and finished the homework at home, so I seldom did the reading unless the teachers required me to do that, I am here to confess that my personal experiences of reading are few, but which does not means that I am not able to the reading work, I just seldom read the books from out of class, however I usually carefully read my textbook, I will underline the sentences or some special vocabularies while I am reading, and figure out the meaning of words or sentences which may be related to the main idea of the article. Sometimes I will copy down the format of sentences expressed in the article; I may learn to use it in my personal writing of the next time. After finishing reading, I may write down the main ideas of the article and its lessons left on the margin side. Study English in the United States, my personal reading experiences was changed with the movement of place. In the English class of ESL, First I will intend to find out the meaning of vocabularies I don’t know by looking up them in the dictionary. Second, I will try my best to understand the meaning of the whole sentence by combining the meaning of vocabularies I found before, however. Sometimes there are lots of different interpretations for one word, so that I do not know which meaning of word I need to choose to make the whole sentence sound correct.

                     The first high school in United States I attended was Manhattan Comprehensive Day and Night High School which is located in between 14th street and 15th street, second Ave in Manhattan, maybe very few people heard about it. I spent almost three years to study ESL English program from level 1 to level 5 with my teachers’ help in that high school, I could have had a chance to jump from level 2 to level 4 but I insisted that I should follow step by step if I really longed to learn English very well. In the daily English class, we usually did the writing works, some reading works, few speaking works and very few listening works, so I intended to be good at writing and reading parts, and the lack of speaking and listening. Even though I could do better in writing, however I had some habits of writing which I didn’t  know if they were positive or negative to me, I used to spend some hours on how to arrange the paragraphs of each essay, what should I write down in each paragraph to make it look perfect, and what kind of words or vocabularies should I use in each sentence to make it sound vivid, I though I had a lot of work to do to prepare the beginning of each essay before I started it, did everyone have same experiences as me? So I profess that I cannot be able to writing a perfect essay in limited time. Also I would like to arrange or make sentences in my mind before I speak out to someone because my spoken English is not good enough I think, and I would sometime forgot the spelling of words I didn’t use them often. In the beginning of learning ESL English, I thought I learned a lot of useful English skills or experiences from my teachers’ lectures and the some grammar books which I studied by myself when I had free time, but I got a strange phenomenon in the later days of learning English, which was that I felt like I learned less and less English skills in daily English courses later, in other words, I might considered that there was nothing could make me interested in learning English again.

                     All in all, In the future days in college, I hope teachers can provide me with lots of important and valuable suggestion on listening, speaking, readings and writings and so on. What’s more, the above some bad habits I have shown can be corrected, and I long to learn lots of or different kinds of vocabularies and improve my memory toward the spelling. So I am looking forward to the help from you.

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