Wednesday, November 20, 2013

Formal Essay 2 First Draft


Mingdong Chen

Freshman composition

Ms. Nargiza Matyakubova

September 27 2013

Literacy analysis

 

           In the “mother tongue” by Amy Tan, the author utilize the literary technics of flashback to demonstrate her mother difficult experiences of speaking the “broken English” in the daily life and receiving the unequal treatment because of the lack of being capable of speaking fluent English, She also describes her captivation to the power of language, how she wields the languages in the different place with different people she meets, and how she is influenced by her “broken English “ to create her ways of looking at the things, expressed things, make sense of the world, which helps her to be a successful writer with the help of her mother. The author establish the main idea that to be the capable of overcoming the daily obstacles and come true the dream.

                     The “fractured English” does not blockade the expression of person’s thoughts. In the article, author depicts her mother speaks the so-called “fractured English” to communicate with her stockbrokers, the doctor, and the servers in the restaurants, yet she receives the cultural discrimination because her impeccable broken English created by her background of borning in foreign country and receive different education of languages. When she states “ and I was sitting there red-faced and quiet, and my mother, the real Mrs. Tan, was shouting at his boss in her impeccable broken English.” Which suggests that her mother Mrs. Tan is not limited to express what she wants to say to the boss because of the lack of fluent English, she bravely stand up against her stockbroker’s irresponsibility, that is the responsibility to herself, she does not flinch in the front of the obstacle, whereas she wants to show her self-respect instead of keeping silent to the stockbroker. By doing that, the author realizes that her mother’s “limited English” does not completely limit her mother daily communication, that is how she overthrows the hard times and influences auther’s ways of viewing in the future and of attitude to her mother, the author used to be ashamed of her mother “broken English” and red-faced when her mother shouts at the boss with impeccable English, nowadays she perfectly understand it.

                     The processing of use of different types of languages. the author becomes aware of this was when giving a speech about her published book named the joy club, her mother is in the audience, and she realizes she is using the academic language she learnt from the school, a language is totally different from that one used with her mother in the family, the other example is when author talking the price of the furniture by saying “ not waste money that way”, those events show the author’s skillful use of languages with different people since her former boss consider the writing is her worst skill of all, so she get great progress in use of languages influenced by her mother “broken English .” that is also how the author deal with use of the languages. In other words, her mother “broken English” helps the author develop her skillful use of languages.

                     From the pre-med to English. The author once mentions that her math skill is better than her writing skill in school, and then she decides to become a freelance writer while her boss tells her that she could not write. However she finally go on to write her fiction, she does not follow the expectation that people want her to be an account manager because of her talents towards that. When the author states “I later decided I should envision a reader for the stories I would write, and the reader I decided upon was my mother.” This suggests that author’s mother somewhat influences her to go on her writing habit, so her mother continuously speak “broken English” as a good example to make the author continuously do her writing major, thus her mother plays a significant role in the author’s life to help her overcome the challenges of writing to be a successful writer in the later days.

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